Short Story #10 for 2023 is due today. The prompt is "Could it?" and it was to be exactly 1800 words. Here's my entry.
Could It?
I parked in front of Bound to
Please, the used bookstore in the rundown shopping center near our home. Used
bookstores were frequent habitats for me at one time, and they still pull me
in from time to time. Although, like many people, I do most of my reading these
days on an electronic reader, I still love the feel of an actual book in my
hands occasionally. The owner of the shop, Carol, looked up as I walked in. She
smiled and greeted me with a generic, “Hi Hun!” inflected to indicate that she
recognized me. I suspect that she recognizes most of her patrons since they are
few and far between, and she loves to chat. I remembered Carol’s name because she had a
nameplate on the checkout counter, but she apparently had forgotten mine.
I had come in to find some affordable copies of books by a recently-discovered
author whose work I really enjoyed. The Kindle download price for any of her
books was more than I liked to pay; so I hoped to find some used copies at
Bound to Please.
Carol offered to help, of course, and, after a brief
discussion of the author I was looking for, Freida McFadden, she added, “I’m
pretty sure that some of McFadden’s older books are in the grab bags on that
table.”
She pointed to a new display. On a table near the front window
were about 10 paper grocery bags colorfully decorated and stapled shut. “I put
some good stuff in those bags, a lot of popular novels that we had several
copies of. Each bag holds at least one or two best sellers, a couple of
non-fiction works, and a couple of different genres of novels,” she continued.
“There are 10-15 books in each bag. The bags are only $6 each.”
I’m not a gambler by nature, and given my advanced age, I am
not inclined to waste time reading mediocre material, so I abandon books
readily these days. If a book doesn’t grab my attention with the opening
paragraphs, I move on to the next book in my pile. (Or, more likely, in the
reading queue on my reading device.) However, to be polite, but with no
expectation of actually buying one, I walked over to pretend an interest in the
grab bags.
After picking up a couple of the bags and feigning interest,
I sauntered on around the shop to the mystery shelves to look for books by my
newly-discovered author. I found three that looked interesting and placed them
on the checkout desk. I browsed the non-fiction and found a couple of painting
instruction books for only $.50 each and added those to the pile. If nothing
else, the paintings that were shown as examples in them would give me some
ideas for new art of my own. I paint a greeting card each month for each of my
college grandchildren to enclose an encouraging message and a little spending
money; so I paint at least four “creations” a month and could use some new
ideas.
I drifted back to the front of the store, totaling the cost
of my purchases in my head. Only $3 for the novels and $1 for the two painting
instruction books. I hated to walk out after making such a small purchase.
Impulsively, I walked back to the grab-bag table. One of the
bags had been decorated with a cute cartoon detective artfully created in
colored pencils.
“Did you do the artwork on the bags?” I asked.
“Yes, I did,” Carol smiled a little sheepishly. “Kinda
silly, huh?”
“Oh, not at all!” I said. “I love the cute little detective
on this one. You gave her quite a personality with that huge, blue ponytail!”
I picked up the bag and set it on the checkout desk with my
selected books. An even $10. I could walk out with a clear conscience if I
spent ten bucks.
Feeling satisfied with the results of my book search, I
walked across the parking lot to my truck. I set the bags in the back
floorboard, got in, and continued to the church to drop off some information for
the secretary and then finish the rest of my morning errands.
Picking
up my Kindle that night to finish my
current read, I suddenly remembered that I had three new paperback novels, some
art books, and a grab-bag of unknown reads in the back floorboard of my truck.
I put down the reading device and went to the garage to bring in my morning’s
purchases.
After looking through the 5 books I’d
bought separately and placing them in my To Be Read basket, I tore open the
grab bag, being careful not to destroy the colorful little detective Carol had drawn
on the bag.
There were 13 books in the bag. Four
of the novels were unappealing genres – horror and science fiction; I laid
those in the box of items to donate. There were three novels I had already read
– by authors I regularly follow. I added the rejects to the donations box too. The
remaining 6 included two novels that I thought I might read and one by McFadden. I put those 3 winners in my TBR basket and
pulled out a non-fiction book titled, She Who Laughs, Lasts! It was a collection of “laugh out-loud stories
from today’s best-known women of faith.” I knew I’d enjoy short stories by
people such as Chondra Pierce and Luci Swindoll. The other two non-fiction titles
didn’t appeal to me at all and went into the to-donate box.
After I finished sorting my purchases,
I began paging through one of the McFadden books. It looked almost new, and I
wondered if it had ever been read at all. As I turned it over, though, to place
it in the TBR basket, I noticed the corner of a folded piece of paper that must
have been used as a bookmark. I pulled it out of the book and saw that it was a
sheet of smooth ivory- colored quality stationery, folded neatly as if to be
inserted into an envelope. I opened the folds. Three short sentences were centered
very neatly on rigidly straight lines on the top half of the sheet.
Barb,
why won’t you answer my question?
I
need to know.
Call
me. Soon!
“What a coincidence!” I thought. Though
my name was Barbara, some of my friends called me ‘Barb’.”
On the bottom half of the paper, in
the same handwriting but much larger script, was a quote:
“For
life and death are one, even as the river and the sea are one.” – Khalil Gibran
I have to admit that I felt a little
off kilter, seeing my name in this context.
I hoped that the real Barb and the note-writer had resolved whatever
issue inspired the note. The writer sounded a little desperate. What could he/she
mean by including that quote at the end? I didn’t like the implication.
I slipped the note back into the book,
put the book back in the TBR basket, and picked up my reader.
###
As I was eating my yogurt the next
morning, I ruminated over the events of the night before. Something about that
perfect handwriting was familiar. There was a niggling little idea in the back
of my mind trying to escape and find a connection to the note I had found in
the book. Where had I seen that precise script before? It feels like a memory
from a very long time ago. That weird boy who was in the study group with me in
Freshman science lab? I remember now how his notebook appeared so neat by
comparison to everybody else’s. And he flirted awkwardly with both me and the
other girl in our group. What was his name? Bradley? Brantley? I never had
another class with him.
I began to wonder if the note had
actually been written for me. Could it have been? Had Bradley/Brantley written
the note? No! That would be too big a coincidence! Nobody could have known I’d
buy that book. Besides, I’d never had a private conversation with
Bradley/Brantley, and he had certainly never asked me an important question. All
that was ancient history, anyway!
I wondered who left the note in the
book. Had “Barb” received the note and then used it for a bookmark? Could it be
that the writer never delivered the note at all and had himself left it in the
book? OR….. Did the writer and “Barb” have an ongoing note-passing routine
using books? How would that work? So many questions!
###
My husband looked at me like he
thought I’d lost my mind. “Really?! It was in a used book you bought? Of course
it’s just a coincidence, Barb! Most people wouldn’t have even read a note found
in a book much less have thought it was written to them! Will you pick up some
grapes when you go to the store?”
He was obviously finished with this
conversation.
“But the writer sounds a little
desperate! And that quote at the bottom – doesn’t that suggest suicide or even
murder to you?” I persisted lamely.
My husband is very fluent in the
language of the Eye Roll, and he eloquently conveyed his extreme disinterest
with a humdinger of an eye roll now.
“Sure, I’ll pick up grapes.” I said, meekly.
###
I was pulling the freshly-washed
grapes off the stems when I heard the garage door go up. It was too early for
Frank to be home from work, so I quickly dried my hands and walked toward the
garage.
“Honey, I’m home!” called Frank,
mimicking the stereotypical sit-com husband.
“How’d you get off work so early?” I
asked as he kissed my cheek and walked past me to put down his briefcase.
“Well, I’m not exactly ‘off work’
yet,” he replied. I have a presentation to finish preparing tonight for that
early meeting tomorrow.” As he talked,
he opened the front door. “I noticed a
sheet of paper stuck on the front door. I’ll see what it is.”
Frank walked back into the kitchen
with a puzzled, and slightly irritated expression on his face. He was holding a
sheet of fine stationery and scowling.
My heart dropped. I recognized the
pale ivory paper. Could it be?
“What’s this about?” Frank demanded,
handing the paper to me. “Is there something going on that I should know about
– BARB? His tone set my name in flashing red lights.
I took the classy ivory-colored
stationery he held out. In beautifully-spaced, board-straight lines and perfect
script were the words.
What
now, Barb?
You
should have answered my question.
My husband glared at me, arms akimbo,
“BARB?” he repeated with raised eyebrows and a suspicious expression.
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