Poem #7 for 2025 was due yesterday in the Deadlines for Writers writing group. I submitted a very incomplete and unified poem via my phone since I was not at home during the 24-hour submission deadline. I would welcome any suggestions to unify the thoughts contained in this one. The prompt was "A Song." I submitted this:
Song of Life
When life plays a joyful song, dance!
Change the key when you must, but create
With drumming in your heart, take a chance!
Sing a song to praise the life He gave.
Prayer, in essence, is a sacred song.
Exulting in a truth from heaven wrung.
So celebrate life’s journey clear and strong.
Never let your song remain unsung.
I love that poem! Never leave your song unsung!
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ReplyDeleteI really love this poem! It’s one of my favorites! The words, tempo and everything about it exudes joy
DeleteThank you, Janice. I tried to merge two thoughts and couldn't seem to make them go together. I will probably do some more work on it until I'm better satisfied.
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